waiting for you // POETRY by elle
i sat in the garden
waiting for you
to walk through the door
to take off your shoes
i sat in the garden
waiting for you
to cover my eyes
and whisper, 'guess who?'
i sat in the garden
waiting for you
i'd lit some candles
and cooked some beef stew
i wait in the garden
for you to appear
i've given up hope,
i drank all your beer.
(E.S)
i love this so so much elle!!! oh my god it made me smile and it's lovely in so many ways wow. if i wrote it up nicely and put it on my wall would you mind?
ReplyDeletex
woah, of course i wouldn't mind! i only write stuff on here so I can improve, so to get a positive response so early makes me really happy :) x
ReplyDelete:-) i love it so much. i've written it then i'm going to decorate it and sellotape it up hehe. i really love the ending of your poem, don't stop writing elle.
Deletex
I just wrote something in the same format. I haven't posted it yet though. I love this though, your blog is amazing<3
ReplyDeletexxBianca
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